Sunday, May 11, 2008

I Retrospect

my grief
He is hearing
above the dark sky
its raining

my pain
no one can feel
across the seas in their abode
they heal

my wisdom
fights my heart's desire
for nothing I asked I got
an ire

my faith
so strong in my peers
shattered by deceit: sharp as
a spear

I retrospect
I find courage with hope abound
to live in these times so simple
yet confound


Anonymous said...

nice poem !!
i really enjoyed it...
the rhyme is good..
and the words are precise and rich...

did you write it yourself?

Hatim said...

thanks :) .....yeah i wrote it whole ..i know its hard to believe :)